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Ithinkthebiggestriskisnomorethanmakingadecisionwhichmaydetermineaperson’sfate(myvalue).SincetwoyearsagoIwasattractedbyastronomy,myfatehasalreadycommunicatedwiththesubject,eventhoughmyfamilydidn’thopeso.OfcourseIknewnoprizeofitcouldtakemetoanidealuniversity,andinChinaitwouldbehardtofindajob.ButpsychologicallyIfeltcalledfromtheHeaven.Angelsseemedtosay“ComeonNicholas,somagicalspaceiswaitingforyoutoexplore.”Inanotherword,I’dliketobeapioneerforunknownforce.
IntruthIhavebeenimpactedgreatlybythecontestsofastronomyandfriendsfarapart.Theyshowedtheirlocalcustomsandtheirdistinctivecharacterswhichimpressedmyheart.Thereisalwayssomeonebetterwhencomparing.Inmycity,ourliveskeepboring.Nocolorfulgames,fewpublicactivitiesheldbyorganizations,noHaagen-Dazs…Justwork,operationandexercise.Suchadevelopingcapitalstaysinadevelopedprovince.Sowhenrecognizedpeerswerefoundingwebsetordesigningrobots,Iwasreadinghistory.Ihaveagoodgraspofhistory,becausenooneteachesmeothers.
Ihavenointentionofbeingtheweak.Atfirst,IlabouredatmathandphysicstoimprovemyastronomylearningtillIwasabletosolveanysciencequestionwhenaskedbyclassmates.SecondlyIcampaignedforthechairmanofStudentCouncil.AlthoughIfailed,Idon’tthinkI’mlackofability.Isurveyedabusesinmanypartsandputforwardadministrativereform,butwastoldonly3minuteslimitedwhengivingmylecture.ThenIsucceedtobeanundersecretary.Asthesame,atanargumentofreformation,Imaintainedforstudentsrelaxedandbecamethefirstknowndemotedcadrebyheadmasterbutnotbyvote.Howcoulddictatorshipscareme?I’vesufferedsomuchandIknewwhatotherschooldidinothercitiesthroughfriends’news.I’mnotashort-sightgirlwhowillcrywhensubjectedtoanunfaircriticism.
ThankstotheriskIchose.,I’vehadmuchfriendshipandbecameemulous.Idaretogofaralone,tocompleteagainstidols,ortotakepartinsomehigh-levelactivitiesthatmyclassmatescannotimagine.Idreamtorealizemyvalue.IthasbeenexplainedinmyChinesecomposition.
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